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I satisfied with my home size.Our house is separated for 5 room.So,my room is small like dorm.But it is perfect to live in.Also our home is flower home
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Hello, David! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)
~ Teacher Tricia
I satisfied with my home size.
>>> I am satisfied with my home size.
Our house is separated for 5 room.
>>> Our house has five rooms.
So,my room is small like dorm.
>>> So, my room is small like a dorm.
But it is perfect to live in.
>>> CORRECT!
Also our home is flower home
>>> Also, our home is a flower home.
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