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today, me and my younger sister changed desks which we study. Mine is going in to my sister's room and her desk is in the living room. Because of that incident, my younger sister's room looks even smaller and the living room looks larger. However, my desk is expensive then her's ㅠㅠ oh no!
My sister's desk is attached with other bookshelf but mine is free. I want my sister to clean her things. I want to put mine"
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Hello Joey,
I guess you are going to miss your desk. Anyway I hope you find your sister's desk to be comfortable. Talk to you tomorrow.
-RJ-
today, me and my younger sister changed desks which we study.
>>Today, me and my younger sister changed desks which we use to study.
Mine is going in to my sister's room and her desk is in the living room.
>>Mines is going to my sister's room and her desk going in the living room.
Because of that incident, my younger sister's room looks even smaller and the living room looks larger.
>>correct
However, my desk is expensive then her's ㅠㅠ oh no!
>>However, my desk is more expensive then her's ㅠㅠ oh no!My sister's desk is attached with other bookshelf but mine is free.
>>My sister's desk is attached to another bookshelf but mine is free.
I want my sister to clean her things. I want to put mine"!
>>I want my sister to clean out her things. I want to put mine"!
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