HOME is house with family
학생이 쓴 원문
I think home is house with family. If there is not family, it\'s not home, just house. Home is not construction, it consists of family members. I\'ll take some examples that turn house into home.
First, when my dad went to Indonesia because of business, he lived in a house alone. However, when my brother went to there, the house became home.
Second, in the \"HOME ALONE\", it turn into house when Kevin lived there alone. So I think the name of movie is wrong. It have to be \"HOUSE ALONE\".
강사 첨삭
I think home is house with family.
>> I think a home is a house with a family.
First, when my dad went to Indonesia because of business, he lived in a house alone.
If there is not family, it\'s not home, just house.
>> If there is no family living in it, it\'s not a home but just a house.
Home is not construction, it consists of family members.
>> A home is not a building. It consists of family members.
I\'ll take some examples that turn house into home.
>> I\'ll cite some examples that turn a house into a home.
First, when my dad went to Indonesia because of business, he lived in a house alone.
>> This is a good sentence.
However, when my brother went to there, the house became home.
>> However, when my brother went there, the house became a home.
Second, in the \"HOME ALONE\", it turn into house when Kevin lived there alone.
>> Second, in \"Home Alone,\" Kevin\'s house turned into one when he lived there alone.
So I think the name of movie is wrong. It have to be \"HOUSE ALONE\".
>> So I think the title of the movie is wrong. It should be \"HOUSE ALONE.\"
Thank you for doing your homework, Daniel. Fantastic!
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