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2017-12-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jacey

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I like Christmas very much! Because when the Christmas came, we cxchange presents and decorate the trees. The street is so beautiful that day. I think it is fun and beautiful day. I'm looking forward this year's Christmas!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yu [이름]! :)

Thank you for doing your homework today.

I hope you could get enough rest tonight and that your sister will feel better soon.

See you tomorrow!


~ Jacey


I like Christmas very much! Because when the Christmas came, we cxchange presents and decorate the trees. The street is so beautiful that day. I think it is fun and beautiful day. I\'m looking forward this year\'s Christmas!

>> I like Christmas very much because when it\'s Christmas, we exchange presents and decorate the trees. The streets are sop beautiful during that day. I think it is a fun and beautiful day. I am looking forward to this year\'s Christmas!

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