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2013-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Q. I would like to know your expectations in this class. Please include the reason why you want to study English. Try to write some of your strengths and weaknesses that may help or hinder you in speaking English fluently. A. I expect to improve my speaking English skills. I can explain as the level of Toeic Speaking, at least level 6. There are so many foreign colleagues in my company. Besides, most clients are foreigners. I'd like to communicate with them easily and fluently. And I finally want to become a global smart engineer. Basically, the main reason that I hesitate when I speak in English is the vocabulary. Sometimes I can't think proper words in English. Hence, I'd like you teach more "word of the day" that related the Unit of our text book when you do feedback for me. Secondly, my weakness is grammer. I really hope and thank whenever you fix my grammer rightly while we're talking and I use wrong grammer.

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Hi there! Thank you for doing your homework. You did a great job. Just keep it up and in no time, you\'ll be able to reach your goal. Have a great day! T. Jane^^-   Q. I would like to know your expectations in this class. Please include the reason why you want to study English. Try to write some of your strengths and weaknesses that may help or hinder you in speaking English fluently.A. I expect to improve my speaking English skills. >> I expect to improve my English speaking skills.  I can explain as the level of Toeic Speaking, at least level 6. >> I got the 6th level on the TOEIC speaking.There are so many foreign colleagues in my company. >> I have many foreign colleagues in our company.  Besides, most clients are foreigners. >> Another is that most of our clients are foreigners. I\'d like to communicate with them easily and fluently. >> Correct  And I finally want to become a global smart engineer.>> Moreover, I want to become a globally competitive engineer.Basically, the main reason that I hesitate when I speak in English is the vocabulary. >>  Basically, the main reason why I hesitate to speak in English is my vocabulary.Sometimes I can\'t think proper words in English. >> Sometimes, I forget the proper English term.  Hence, I\'d like you teach more \"word of the day\" that related the Unit of our text book when you do feedback for me.>> Hence, I\'d like you to teach me more English words that are related to our everyday lessons and please indicate them on your evaluation for me.Secondly, my weakness is grammer. >> Correct I really hope and thank whenever you fix my grammer rightly while we\'re talking and I use wrong grammer. >>  I\'m really thankful to you whenever you correct my grammar during our conversations.

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