home work - Talk about the scariest movie/story that you have watched/heard.

2015-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jessie

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I didn't remembered the scariest movie or story. Because i am good at watching a horrible movie. So i will talk about the cruel movie i saw. the movie's name is saw. The age of watching the movie is only 13 years old. I was a elementery schoolchild! That series is very impressed and shocked to me. I remember that untill now.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for having time to write your homework.
Indeed! It was horrible. I actually don\'t like \"Saw.\"
Anyway, let\'s talk more on Monday!
See you soon!
~T. Jessie~
I didn\'t remembered the scariest movie or story.
>> I don\'t remember the scariest movie or story.
Because i am good at watching a horrible movie.
>> Because I am good at watching horrible movies.
So i will talk about the cruel movie i saw.
>> So I will talk about the cruel movie I saw.
the movie\'s name is saw.
>> The movie\'s name is \"Saw.\"
The age of watching the movie is only 13 years old.
>> Correct!
OR>> I should only watch the movie if I am 13 years old or older.
I was a elementery schoolchild!
>> I was an elementary school student!
That series is very impressed and shocked to me.
>> That series is very impressive and shocking to me.
I remember that untill now.
>> I remember that until now.

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