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How do you prioritize your physical health in your daily routine?
I used to not care of my physical healthy before.
I considered that I can be healthy without some caring me.
Bcause I could maintain my weight consistantly if I ate some dishes.
But now I changed my body and weight.
So I modified my mind.
At first, I must drink a mixed coffee. Only a cup of coffee, a day.
Second, I must not eat as much as bombed my stomache.
third, I must go to work out a day of a week.
I still strive to keep these promises for me.
However, I’m sometimes be lazy person and be mad at foods.
Don’t worry. It do not come the health,But my mind back early.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Stella! Thank you for sharing your health routines. May you always stay active and healthy. ^^ Have a great weekend with your family!
~T. Jewel
I used to not care of my physical healthy before.
>>I used not to care about my physical health before.
I considered that I can be healthy without some caring me.
>>I thought I could be healthy without taking care of myself.
Bcause I could maintain my weight consistantly if I ate some dishes.
Bcause I could maintain my weight consistantly if I ate some dishes.
>>I could maintain my weight consistently if I ate certain foods.
But now I changed my body and weight.
But now I changed my body and weight.
>>But now, my body and weight have changed.
So I modified my mind.
So I modified my mind.
>>So I changed my mindset.
At first, I must drink a mixed coffee. Only a cup of coffee, a day.
At first, I must drink a mixed coffee. Only a cup of coffee, a day.
>>First, I must drink only one cup of mixed coffee a day.
Second, I must not eat as much as bombed my stomache.
Second, I must not eat as much as bombed my stomache.
>>Second, I must not eat so much that I feel like my stomach is going to explode.
third, I must go to work out a day of a week.
third, I must go to work out a day of a week.
>>Third, I must work out once a week.
I still strive to keep these promises for me.
I still strive to keep these promises for me.
>>CORRECT
OR
>>I still strive to keep these promises to myself.
However, I’m sometimes be lazy person and be mad at foods.
>>I still strive to keep these promises to myself.
However, I’m sometimes be lazy person and be mad at foods.
>>However, I can sometimes be lazy and get mad at food.
Don’t worry. It do not come the health,But my mind back early.
Don’t worry. It do not come the health,But my mind back early.
>>But I don\'t worry because it doesn\'t affect my health and puts my mind at ease.
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