Home work(10.24)
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Fill in a, an or some.
1. I need (a) new coat.
2. I'll come back in (an) hour.
3. I need (some) stamps.
4. Do you like (some) coffee?
5. She is (a) unhappy girl.
And Teacher Cam~ Could you check a grammer and expression of the mail below?
(Include this sentence.^^;)
I just started penpal with American girl~*^^*
I think that penpal helps me to improve English composition skill.
Hi! Izel~Thanks for sending the mail to me.
I knew this site just few days, so I didn't know how to use this site.
But you sent mail first so I was really happy and thank you^^
My name is seung hyeok Cha.
But just call me [이름].^^
I want to improve my English level.
so please help me what should I do~
I hope we can chat and exchange languages, too.^^
And I will register your kakao ID.
I can't speak English well so you should understand me, please~
Anyway, Feel free to contact me anytime you want! Bye~
Thanks, Cam!
강사 첨삭
Hi Sir [이름], good afternoon!
Wow! You really have a penpal?
HOw? I want to know more about her in our class Sir [이름] if its okay with youi..kkk..
ANyway, its nice to hear that you are doing everything to improve your English skills..
Talk to you later Sir and take care..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Fill in a, an or some.1. I need (a) new coat.>>correct2. I\'ll come back in (an) hour.>>correct3. I need (some) stamps.>>correct4. Do you like (some) coffee?>>correct5. She is (a) unhappy girl.>>She is an unhappy girl.And Teacher Cam~ Could you check a grammer and expression of the mail below?
>>And Teacher Cam could you check my grammar and sentences below?(Include this sentence.^^;)
>>Including this sentence.I just started penpal with American girl~*^^*
>>I just started writing to an American girl.
>> I just started a penpal with an American girl.I think that penpal helps me to improve English composition skill.>>I think doing so helps meimprove my English writing skill.Hi! Izel~Thanks for sending the mail to me.
>>HI Izel!Thanks for sedning me an email.I knew this site just few days, so I didn\'t know how to use this site.
>>I got familiar with this site a few days ago, but I dont know how to use it.But you sent mail first so I was really happy and thank you^^
>>But you sent me an email first so Im really happy and grateful.^^My name is seung hyeok Cha.
>>correct
>>My name is [Name] Cha. Proper name should be written in Capital letters.But just call me [이름].^^
>>correct
>>But you can call me [이름].I want to improve my English level.
>>I want to improve my English skills.so please help me what should I do~
>>And I will be very very grateful if you will help me with it.I hope we can chat and exchange languages, too.^^
>>I hope we can chat and exchange mails too.And I will register your kakao ID.
>>And I will also register your ID in kakaotalk.I can\'t speak English well so you should understand me, please~
>>I can\'t speak well so please understand me..Anyway, Feel free to contact me anytime you want! Bye~>>correctThanks, Cam!
>>Thanks Cam!
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