Home work(10.24)

2012-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Fill in a, an or some. 1. I need (a) new coat. 2. I'll come back in (an) hour. 3. I need (some) stamps. 4. Do you like (some) coffee? 5. She is (a) unhappy girl. And Teacher Cam~ Could you check a grammer and expression of the mail below? (Include this sentence.^^;) I just started penpal with American girl~*^^* I think that penpal helps me to improve English composition skill. Hi! Izel~Thanks for sending the mail to me. I knew this site just few days, so I didn't know how to use this site. But you sent mail first so I was really happy and thank you^^ My name is seung hyeok Cha. But just call me [이름].^^ I want to improve my English level. so please help me what should I do~ I hope we can chat and exchange languages, too.^^ And I will register your kakao ID. I can't speak English well so you should understand me, please~ Anyway, Feel free to contact me anytime you want! Bye~ Thanks, Cam!

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Hi Sir [이름], good afternoon! Wow! You really have a penpal? HOw? I want to know more about her in our class Sir [이름] if its okay with youi..kkk.. ANyway, its nice to hear that you are doing everything to improve your English skills.. Talk to you later Sir and take care.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Fill in a, an or some.1. I need (a) new coat.>>correct2. I\'ll come back in (an) hour.>>correct3. I need (some) stamps.>>correct4. Do you like (some) coffee?>>correct5. She is (a) unhappy girl.>>She is an unhappy girl.And Teacher Cam~ Could you check a grammer and expression of the mail below? >>And Teacher Cam could you check my grammar and sentences below?(Include this sentence.^^;) >>Including this sentence.I just started penpal with American girl~*^^* >>I just started writing to an American girl. >> I just started a penpal with an American girl.I think that penpal helps me to improve English composition skill.>>I think doing so helps meimprove my English writing skill.Hi! Izel~Thanks for sending the mail to me. >>HI Izel!Thanks for sedning me an email.I knew this site just few days, so I didn\'t know how to use this site. >>I got familiar with this site a few days ago, but I dont know how to use it.But you sent mail first so I was really happy and thank you^^ >>But you sent me an email first so Im really happy and grateful.^^My name is seung hyeok Cha. >>correct >>My name is [Name] Cha. Proper name should be written in Capital letters.But just call me [이름].^^ >>correct >>But you can call me [이름].I want to improve my English level. >>I want to improve my English skills.so please help me what should I do~ >>And I will be very very grateful if you will help me with it.I hope we can chat and exchange languages, too.^^ >>I hope we can chat and exchange mails too.And I will register your kakao ID. >>And I will also register your ID in kakaotalk.I can\'t speak English well so you should understand me, please~ >>I can\'t speak well so please understand me..Anyway, Feel free to contact me anytime you want! Bye~>>correctThanks, Cam! >>Thanks Cam!

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