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This picture show the window. and The window is captured in the room
>>This picture shows a window and the window is captured in a room.
At the center of the picture, There is a window. It is closed.
>>There is a window in the center of the picture and it\'s closed.
And two side of the window, There is a cartain. it has a check patten.
>>There are curtains on both sides of the window.
Out side of the window, there are trees.
>>There are trees outside the window.
And the leaves turned red so It look like fall
>>And it looks like autumn because the leaves are red.
Out side of the window, There is a building but it looks blurry so I can\'t see it exactly
>>There\'s a building outside the window, but it\'s hard to see because it\'s blurry.
At the corner of the picture, there is couch
>>There is a couch in the corner of the picture.
And the weather looks good and No one is there
>>And the weather looks good and there is no one.
There are people. i think this place is airport so they are waiting for airplain schdule.
>>There are people and I think this is an airport, so they are waiting for the flight schedule.
some of the people are sleeping and one of the people is reading a book. and a person reading a book is her.
>>Some people are sleeping and a woman is reading a book.
right side of the woman, there are two bags.
>>There are two bags on the right side of the woman.
one bag is a bagpack and other one is a cross bag.
>>One bag is a backpack and the other bag is a cross bag.
at the back seat of the woman, there is a man wearing a wine jaket.
>>In the back seat of the woman, there is a man in a wine jacket.
in the airport, there are a glass wall which people can see outside and benchs on that people can seat and take a rest.
>>The airport has glass walls and benches where people can sit and relax.
the picture is blurry except for a woman and bags. so i hard to see the picture in more detail.
>>The picture is blurry except the woman and the bags, so I can hardly see more details.
in the picture, there are a mom and two daughters.
>>There is a mother and two daughters in the picture.
they are eatting tomato pasta together.
>>They are eating tomato pasta together.
one of the daughters put her hand over her head grabbing a fork. and she looks happy
and other one is wearing glasses.
>>One of the daughters held a fork and put her hand over her head, and she looked happy and the other was wearing glasses.
they are all so cute. mom is wearing a green T-shirt.
>>They are all cute and the mom is wearing a green T-shirt.
on the table, there are some foods such as tomato pasta and dishes.
>>There are foods like tomato pasta and other dishes on the table.
there are various food on the dishes such as pasta and bread.
>>There are various foods such as pasta and bread.
at the back of the people, there is the kitchen.
>>There are people at the background of the picture.
in the the kitchen there is a machine.
>>There is a machine in the kitchen.
but i don\'t know if it is a coffee machine or toast machine some chairs are disoccupied.
>>I\'m not sure if it\'s a coffee machine or a toast machine.
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