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2020-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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Yes.i use it little.because convenient and addictive. I didn\'t listen to yesterday\'s question very well. Answer How many times have you moved to another city when you were young? Whan l was a young I moved from house to apartment only once. I got married and moved to Gangnam twice because of my husband\'s job and my children\'s school.

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ms. [Name]^^ 
Thank you again for answering your homework. 

Yes.i use it little.because convenient and addictive.
>>>Yes, it\'s convenient and addictive, so I use a little bit.
I didn\'t listen to yesterday\'s question very well.
>>>I didn\'t understand the question well yesterday. 
Whan l was a young I moved from house to apartment only once.
>>> I just moved once when I was young. 
I got married and moved to Gangnam twice because of my husband\'s job and my children\'s school.
>>>I moved to Gangnam twice because of my husband\'s job and my children\'s school.

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