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2020-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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No. I\'ve never made an itinerary for a trip. When I went on a free trip with family,my doughter made an itinerary for the trip,and when I went with my friend,I did a package tour.

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Lovely evening Ms. [Name]! 
Thank you for sending your homework tonight! 
Traveling with friends and family is actually wonderful and fun. 
I love to make good memories with my family and friends, too. 
Goodnight^^ 

No. I\'ve never made an itinerary for a trip.
>>> CORRECT!
When I went on a free trip with family,my doughter made an itinerary for the trip,and when I went with my friend,I did a package tour.
>>> When I went on a free trip with my family, my helper made a schedule for the trip, and went with a friend, I went on a package tour. 




 

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