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2020-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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I think being an editor is a good job becuse they can help pepole. mabe Icuid be an editor to. I don\\\'t now what I will be someday there is time to think about it. but it will be OK to be an editor to. but an editor is a good job to do.

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Hello Ruby!
I think being an editor is indeed a great job, but maybe he/she is busy. ^ ^
-Rachel 
I think being an editor is a good job becuse they can help pepole.
>> I think being an editor is a good job because an editor can help people.
mabe Icuid be an editor to.
>> Maybe I could be an editor too.
I don\\\'t now what I will be someday there is time to think about it.
>> I don\'t know what I will be someday, but I still have time to think about it.
but it will be OK to be an editor to.
>> But, it will be okay to be an editor too.
but an editor is a good job to do.
>> Because being an editor is good job too. 

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