home work
학생이 쓴 원문
1I usually say \"Hello!\" when I meet somneone. English culture has 3 kinds of greeting such as morning, afternoon and night. However, Korean doesn\'t have those. So, I am not a familiar with greeting following times. So, just saying hello is my favorite greeting.
2.I use different kinds of greeting when I meet foreigners and Koreans as the age is important in Korea. When I meet foreigners, I can say just their name, so the age is not important. However, in Korea, greeting is different by age. We should be polite to elder. That\'s why I use different greeting.
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1I usually say \"Hello!\" when I meet somneone. >> 1. I usually say \"Hello!\" when I meet someone.
English culture has 3 kinds of greeting such as morning, afternoon and night.
>> English culture has 3 kinds of greetings such as morning, afternoon and night.
However, Korean doesn\'t have those.
>> However, Koreans don\'t have those.
So, I am not a familiar with greeting following times.
>> So, I am not a familiar with greetings that depend on time of the day.
So, just saying hello is my favorite greeting.
>> So, just saying \'hello\' is my favorite greeting.
2.I use different kinds of greeting when I meet foreigners and Koreans as the age is important in Korea.
2.I use different kinds of greeting when I meet foreigners and Koreans as the age is important in Korea.
>> 2. I use different kinds of greetings when I meet foreigners and Koreans as age is important in Korea.
When I meet foreigners, I can say just their name, so the age is not important.
>> When I meet foreigners, I just say their name, because the age is not important.
However, in Korea, greeting is different by age.
>> However, in Korea, greetings are different by age.
We should be polite to elder.
>> We should be polite to elders.
That\'s why I use different greeting.
>> That\'s why, I use different greetings.
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