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2021-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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I wnet to trip at Switzerland in 2years ago I was paragliding there It wsa very beautiful and fantastic It was the most amazing experience

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Hello [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I wnet to trip at Switzerland in 2years ago

>> I went on a trip to Switzerland 2 years ago.
I was paragliding there

>> I did paragliding there.
It wsa very beautiful and fantastic

>> It was fantastic and very beautiful.
It was the most amazing experience

>> It was the most amazing experience I\'ve had.


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