Home work(11.2)

2012-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

1. (Although) the weather was bad, we enjoyed our trip. 2. The children slept well (in spite of) the noise. 3. (In spite of) earning a low salary, Linda gave money to her parents. 4. John rarely sees Paul (although) they live in the same town. 5. Tom went to work (in spite of) not feeling very well. Hi, Cam! I'm sorry that I didn't have our class last friday. I had an appointment with my friends and I couldn't contact to the web site because it's too late. You called me 5 times but I turned off the phone without a class.^^; Anyway I am so sorry and see you today!

강사 첨삭

Hello!
Apology accepted!^^
This is because you did good in your homework.
I\'ll be seeing you then.
Take care!
_T.Camille^^
1. (Although) the weather was bad, we enjoyed our trip.
>> Correct
2. The children slept well (in spite of) the noise.

>> Correct
3. (In spite of) earning a low salary, Linda gave money to her parents.

>> Correct
4. John rarely sees Paul (although) they live in the same town.

>> Correct
5. Tom went to work (in spite of) not feeling very well.

>> Correct
Hi, Cam!

>> Correct
I\'m sorry that I didn\'t have our class last Friday.

>> Correct
I had an appointment with my friends and I couldn\'t contact to the web site
because it\'s too late.
>> I had an appointment with my friends and I couldn\'t contact your management because it was too late.
You called me 5 times but I turned off the phone without a class.^^;

>> You called me 5 times but I turned off the phone without having the class.^^;
Anyway, I am so sorry and see you today!
>> Correct

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