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2015-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Are you an optimistic or a pes[이름]istic person? I am an optimistic person because I believe that I can do everything with confident. If I have a full confident , There are nothing what I can't achieve a goal. I believe myself and I prepare for future very hard , I can achieve a goal what I want.

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I am so glad you are an optimistic person. Mr. [이름]on ;)

Thanks for doing your homework^^

Let us review your relative pronouns ;)

I can achieve a goal what I want.

>>I can achieve a goal THAT I want.

There are nothing what I can\'t achieve a goal.

>>There is no goal THAT I cannot achieve.

Are you an optimistic or a pes[이름]istic person?
I am an optimistic person because I believe that I can do everything with confident.
>>
I am an optimistic person because I believe that I can do everything with confidence.
If I have a full confident , There are nothing what I can\'t achieve a goal.
>>
If I am confident , there is no goal that I cannot achieve.
I believe myself and I prepare for future very hard , I can achieve a goal what I want.

>>If believe in myself and prepare for the future very hard, I can achieve a goal that I want.

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