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2021-12-22 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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How do you approach a stranger? Usually I don’t talk to strangers. I wonder how does people think of me. So I don’t approach a stranger. But if I talk to stranger. I would say “Excuse me” with smiling and I say “Do you have some time now? If it possible let we have some coffee.”

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 Good day, Ms. [이름]ny! Thank you for answering the homework today. I am glad that you make some efforts to excel in your English study. See you in our class! :)

- Teacher Sophia


Usually I don’t talk to strangers.

>> Usually, I don’t talk to strangers.
I wonder how does people think of me

>> Correct
So I don’t approach a stranger.

>> Correct
But if I talk to stranger. 
I would say “Excuse me” with smiling and I say “Do you have some time now?

>> If I talk to a stranger, I\'d say \"excuse me\" and smile. Also, I\'d ask, \"do you have some time now?\"
If it possible let we have some coffee.”

>> If it is possible, I will ask them if they have some time for a coffee.

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