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2022-01-05 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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I went to the Lamb skewer restaurant in seoul today. With my aunt, we ate lamb skewer as well as drink beer. My aunt pay it for me, so i feel delicious it more.

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Good morning [이름] [이름]! 
Wow, you must have enjoyed your food. 
I would like to enjoy lamb, but we don\'t have in the city.  :( 

I went to the Lamb skewer restaurant in seoul today. 
>>> I went to a lamb skewer restaurant in Seoul today.
With my aunt, we ate lamb skewer as well as drink beer. 
>>> I ate lamb skewers and drank beer with my aunt.
My aunt pay it for me, so i feel delicious it more.
>>> I think it\'s more delicious because my aunt paid it for me. 

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