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Who are your close friends?
I have many friends, but there are 5 close friends. They are [이름] heon, ji hoon, tae gun, e heon and sau jin. They all have they\' re advantages and I like them.
What do your close friends love doing?
First, [이름] heon loves to play computer games and basketball. Second, ji hoon. He is very good at mobile games and he love playoing it. he loves playing other games too. Tae gun is third and he loves playing board games and mobile games. Fourth e heon loves playing sports and game called kart rider. last sea jin, he\'s from U.S.A and he loves running and baseball.
What are stories do your close friends share with you?
E heon and I were one team in basketball and we won other teams 5 ins a row! Basket ball teachers said that it is a new record! Me, E heon and are team was very happy.
[이름] heon and I did a badminton battle. we had a 5 battle and I won 2 times and he won 3 times! it was a very good battle and it was very exciting.
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Hi [이름] Ju,
Good friends help us to develop our self-esteem. Having someone in our life who thinks we are important someone who wants our opinion on things and who values our company makes us feel wanted, boosting self-esteem. You learn a lot from your best friend, which is only one more reason to be grateful to have them in your life. Have a great weekend.. ~ Teacher QUENNY ..
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Who are your close friends?
>>Who are your close friends?(CORRECT)
I have many friends, but there are 5 close friends.
>> I have many friends, but there are 5 close friends. (CORRECT)
They are [이름] heon, ji hoon, tae gun, e heon and sau jin.
>> They are [이름] Heon, Ji Hoon, Tae Gun, E Heon, and Sau Jin.
They all have they\' re advantages and I like them.
>> They all have their good points and I like them.
What do your close friends love doing?
>>What do your close friends love doing?(CORRECT)
First, [이름] heon loves to play computer games and basketball.
>>First, [이름] Heon loves to play computer games and basketball.
Second, ji hoon. He is very good at mobile games and he love playoing it.
>>Second, Ji Hoon. He is very good at mobile games and he loves playing them.
he loves playing other games too.
>>He loves playing other games too.
Tae gun is third and he loves playing board games and mobile games.
>>Tae Gun is third and he loves playing board games and mobile games.
Fourth e heon loves playing sports and game called kart rider.
>>Fourth E Heon loves playing sports and games called Kart Rider.
last sea jin, he\'s from U.S.A and he loves running and baseball.
>>Last Sea Jin, he\'s from the U.S.A and he loves running and playing baseball.
What are stories do your close friends share with you?
>>What are stories do your close friends share with you?(CORRECT)
E heon and I were one team in basketball and we won other teams 5 ins a row!
>> E Heon and I were one teammate in basketball and we won other teams 5 in a row!
Basket ball teachers said that it is a new record! Me, E heon and are team was very happy.
>> Basketball teachers said that it is a new record! I, E Heon, and our team were very happy.
[이름] heon and I did a badminton battle.
>> [이름] Heon and I did a badminton battle.
we had a 5 battle and I won 2 times and he won 3 times! it was a very good battle and it was very exciting.
>>We had a 5 battle and I won 2 times and he won 3 times! It was a very good battle and it was very exciting.
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Who are your close friends?
I have many friends, but there are 5 close friends. They are [이름] heon, ji hoon, tae gun, e heon and sau jin. They all have they\' re advantages and I like them.
What do your close friends love doing?
First, [이름] heon loves to play computer games and basketball. Second, ji hoon. He is very good at mobile games and he love playoing it. he loves playing other games too. Tae gun is third and he loves playing board games and mobile games. Fourth e heon loves playing sports and game called kart rider. last sea jin, he\'s from U.S.A and he loves running and baseball.
What are stories do your close friends share with you?
E heon and I were one team in basketball and we won other teams 5 ins a row! Basket ball teachers said that it is a new record! Me, E heon and are team was very happy.
[이름] heon and I did a badminton battle. we had a 5 battle and I won 2 times and he won 3 times! it was a very good battle and it was very exciting.
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