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How do you feel when you are alone?
I don\'t like being alone. Not to much, but yes. It\'s scared when I\'m alone and I heard of a noise that I don\'t know.
What do you do when your alone?
I often play with lego. I often read a book. Some times I plays mobile games too. And some times I finish my korean academys home work.
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Hi [이름] Ju,
Thank you for answering your homework:)
Being alone has pros and cons. These are the following pros of being alone. Being alone allows our brain to recharge, increase our productivity to do our homework fast, boost our creativity more likely to come up with our best ideas on our own and actually strengthen relationships with others because time alone allows us to appreciate our time with others more, rather than taking it for granted or feeling overwhelmed by it. And the cons are being alone makes us vulnerable to our inner critics, can sometimes lead to painful loneliness and depression, and can be bad for our health. ~ Teacher QUENNY>.:)
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How do you feel when you are alone?
>> How do you feel when you are alone?(Correct)
I don\'t like being alone. Not to much, but yes.
>> Yes, I sometimes want to be alone but I don\'t like being alone that much.
It\'s scared when I\'m alone and I heard of a noise that I don\'t know.
>> I feel scared when I\'m alone and I can hear some noise that I don\'t know where is it coming from and I can\'t understand.
What do you do when your alone?
>> What do you do when you\'re alone?
I often play with lego.
>> I often play with lego. (Correct)
I often read a book.
>> I often read a book.
Some times I plays mobile games too.
>> I sometimes play mobile games too.
And some times I finish my korean academys home work.
>> And I sometimes finish my Korean Academy\'s homework.
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How do you feel when you are alone?
I don\'t like being alone. Not to much, but yes. It\'s scared when I\'m alone and I heard of a noise that I don\'t know.
What do you do when your alone?
I often play with lego. I often read a book. Some times I plays mobile games too. And some times I finish my korean academys home work.
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