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What nationalities of your classmates?
Most of my friends are korean. But one of my best friend seajin is from U.S.A. So he\'s English skills are great.
What can you say about your English class?
My English class in school, it\'s fun. We play lots of games about English. And the test isn\'t any hard at all. So I like the English class.
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Hi [이름] Ju,
Nationality not only provides people with a sense of identity and belonging, but it is also important for full State protection and the enjoyment of many human rights, including education, health care, legal employment, property ownership, political participation, and freedom of movement. ~ Teacher QUENNY..
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What nationalities of your classmates?
>> What are the nationalities of your classmates?
Most of my friends are korean. But one of my best friend seajin is from U.S.A. So he\'s English skills are great.
>> Most of my friends are Korean but one of my best friends Seajin is from the U.S.A, so he has great English skills.
What can you say about your English class?
>> What can you say about your English class? (CORRECT)
My English class in school, it\'s fun. We play lots of games about English. And the test isn\'t any hard at all. So I like the English class.
>> My English class in school is fun because my teacher is active and energetic when teaching. We play lots of games about English and the test isn\'t any hard at all. So I like the English class.
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What nationalities of your classmates?
Most of my friends are korean. But one of my best friend seajin is from U.S.A. So he\'s English skills are great.
What can you say about your English class?
My English class in school, it\'s fun. We play lots of games about English. And the test isn\'t any hard at all. So I like the English class.
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