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When would you like to go to the park with your family?
I think when it\'s sunny on weekend. Because, are family is busy at weekdays. So I think it has to be a weekend. And I like to walk in warm weather.
What are the activities that may you enjoy at the park?
I think riding a bicycle. Because I like to ride a bicycle very much.
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Hi [이름] Ju,
Parks provide intrinsic environmental, aesthetic, and recreation benefits to our cities. They are also a source of positive economic benefits. They enhance property values, increase municipal revenue, bring in homebuyers and workers, and attract retirees. Enjoy playing at the Park with your family.
~ Teacher Quenny..
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When would you like to go to the park with your family?
>> When would you like to go to the park with your family? (Correct)
I think when it\'s sunny on weekend. Because, are family is busy at weekdays. So I think it has to be a weekend. And I like to walk in warm weather.
>> I think the best time to go to the Park with my family is when it\'s sunny on the weekend because our family is busy on weekdays. So I think it has to be on a weekend. And I like to walk when the weather is warm.
What are the activities that may you enjoy at the park?
>> What are the activities that may you enjoy at the park?(Correct)
I think riding a bicycle. Because I like to ride a bicycle very much.
>> I think riding a bicycle is what I will enjoy the most at the Park because I like to ride a bicycle very much.
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When would you like to go to the park with your family?
I think when it\'s sunny on weekend. Because, are family is busy at weekdays. So I think it has to be a weekend. And I like to walk in warm weather.
What are the activities that may you enjoy at the park?
I think riding a bicycle. Because I like to ride a bicycle very much.
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