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2022-03-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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my best birthday gift is a clothes.bcause i am like clothes.in my birthday my parentds give me a many clothes.so my best birthday gift is a clothes.

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Hi Do [이름]!

Your parents are good in picking gifts for you! They know you very well. :)

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my best birthday gift is a clothes.bcause i am like clothes.

>> The best birthday gift that I got are clothes because I like them.

in my birthday my parentds give me a many clothes.

>> On my birthday, may parents gave me many clothes.

so my best birthday gift is a clothes.

>> This is why it is the best gift for me.

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