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No. Because you will get older anyway, and I think there are many good things about being an adult.And I think you shouldn\'t be scared of that and enjoy it.
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That\'s good! Getting old is a very natural thing. As we grow older, the wiser we get as well. :)
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No. Because you will get older anyway, and I think there are many good things about being an adult.
>> No, I am not because everyone will get older anyway. I think there are many good things about being an adult.
And I think you shouldn\'t be scared of that and enjoy it.
>> And I think you shouldn\'t be scared of that and enjoy it instead.
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