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A stressful but expensive job.Because if I don\'t have money, it\'s hard to make a living.Moreover, if I don\'t have money, it will be hard when I have to buy or want to buy something.
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Hi Do [이름]!
That\'s true. We need to strive hard to earn for a living.
A stressful but expensive job.Because if I don\'t have money, it\'s hard to make a living.
>> I would pick a stressful but high-paying job because if I don\'t have money, it\'s hard to make a living.
Moreover, if I don\'t have money, it will be hard when I have to buy or want to buy something.
>> Moreover, if I don\'t have money, it will be hard to buy want I need or want.
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