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These days, Many parents only have one child.
So they do everything whatever their children want to something.
It doesn’t matter what advertisement show up on TV.
Parents have to judge whether to buy or not. They don’t need to buy toys showing up the advertisements.
They could borrow some toys.
They need to control whether it is necessary for their children after looking at a lot of advertisements.
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Good morning [이름]ny!
I am glad to receive answers from you :) I agree that most parents try to give everything what children wants maybe because they want their children to stop from bugging them off.
See you later.
Aki~
These days, Many parents only have one child.
>>> CORRECT!
So they do everything whatever their children want to something.
>>> So they do everything whatever their child wants.
It doesn’t matter what advertisement show up on TV.
It doesn’t matter what advertisement show up on TV.
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> Even TV advertisements do not matter to them.
Parents have to judge whether to buy or not. They don’t need to buy toys showing up the advertisements.
Parents have to judge whether to buy or not. They don’t need to buy toys showing up the advertisements.
>>> Parents have to judge whether to buy or not. They don’t need to buy toys shown on the advertisements.
They could borrow some toys.
They could borrow some toys.
>>> CORRECT!
They need to control whether it is necessary for their children after looking at a lot of advertisements.
They need to control whether it is necessary for their children after looking at a lot of advertisements.
>>> CORRECT!
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