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I want to be a per[이름] like Michael Jordan.
Because he was perfectly talented in basket ball.
I want to have a huge talent in something.
And I want to know the feeling of slam dunk.
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Hey there, Mr. [이름]. To be like Michael Jordan is something and to have a talent like that would be unimaginable ^^ Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the topic. I appreciate it. See you in our class. ~Jane c\",)
I want to be a per[이름] like Michael Jordan. Because he was perfectly talented in basket ball.
>> I want to be like Michael Jordan because he is perfectly talented in basketball.
I want to have a huge talent in something.
>> I want to have a huge talent for something.
And I want to know the feeling of slam dunk.
>> And I want to know the feeling of making a slam dunk.
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