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If I could receive anything, I want to receive a camping car.
And I want to travel America in a camping car for a year.
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Mr. [이름], a camper van would be the perfect gift, and traveling around America for a year sounds like a really good plan. I hope you could have your camper van someday.^^ Have a good night and thank you once again. ~Jane :)
If I could receive anything, I want to receive a camping car.
>> CORRECT =)
OR>> If I could receive anything, I want to receive a camper van/ camper.
And I want to travel America in a camping car for a year.
>> And I want to travel around America in a camping car for a year.
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