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I prefer non-fiction films. Because I just want to enjoy the movie without worries. History movies are good for education. There could be a argument because no one knows the fact of history.
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I prefer non-fiction films. Because I just want to enjoy the movie without worries.
>> CORRECT =)
OR>> I prefer non-fiction films because I want to enjoy the movie without overthinking it.
History movies are good for education.
OR>> Historical films are good for education.
There could be a argument because no one knows the fact of history.
>> There could be arguments because no one knows the fact of history.
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