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Children need to realize thier talent.
The sooner they have a dream the better.
They can find thier dreams by reading books,
Traveling,visiting museum and concert .
Parents can help their activity that I said prior.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]ny!
Thank you for doing your homework. I did not do many corrections here but I hope you will be careful with your spelling and punctuation mark. Have fun learning and discovering new things in English.
Aki~
Children need to realize their talent.
>>> CORRECT!
The sooner they have a dream the better.
>>> CORRECT!
They can find their dreams by reading books,
>>> CORRECT!
Traveling,visiting museum and concert .
>>> Traveling, visiting museums and concerts.
Parents can help their activity that I said prior.
>>> Parents can help their activity that I said.
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