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Of cause I wouldn’t buy it that someone was dead there.
I have a lot of fear.
If I live there I would always think about the dead person.
Sometimes I thought If I live alone how do I live .
Maybe I will find a facility for living together.
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Hello, Ms. [이름]ny!
You know what, in my case, If I badly need it, I won\'t hesitate to buy a discounted house as long as it is liveable. I will do some renovations and changes so that the spirit of the murdered person will not be able to recognize as the same place where he/ she died.
Aki~
Of cause I wouldn’t buy it that someone was dead there.
>>> Of course, I wouldn’t buy it if someone died there.
>>> Of course I wouldn’t buy it if someone got killed there.
I have a lot of fear.
>>> CORRECT!
If I live there I would always think about the dead person.
>>> If I lived there I would always think about the dead person.
Sometimes I thought If I live alone how do I live.
>>> I sometimes think, How will I live there?
Maybe I will find a facility for living together.
>>> CORRECT!
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