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If I were a vergine I wouldn’t dated with him.
He might remind x-wife. Although he didn’t do that.
And If I divorced with my husband.
I could date with person who got married.
but I’ll never get married.
I don’t believe pure love If one of them get married to other person.
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Good morning, Ms. [이름]ny!
I like the last part of your sentence and I agree with your point that there is no pure love if one of you has already been married to someone. This is my POV (point of view) pure love exists when you are able to respect and understand each other despite all the circumstances unless the other party (person) is already hurting you physically and emotionally, then it\'s time to let go.
have a great birthday!
Aki~
If I were a vergine I wouldn’t dated with him.
>>> If I were a virgin I wouldn’t date him.
He might remind x-wife. Although he didn’t do that.
>>> He might remember his ex-wife. Although he didn’t do that.
And If I divorced with my husband.
>>> And If I divorced my husband.
I could date with person who got married.
>>> CORRECT!
but I’ll never get married.
>>> CORRECT!
I don’t believe pure love If one of them get married to other person.
>>> I don’t believe in pure love If one of them gets married to another person.
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