home work

2012-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: In this situation act as a manager and answer the complain of your customer. Situation: Mr. [Name]! I ordered a phone from your company a week ago. One of your agents told me that the shipment of the product will take only 2 business days. How come its been a week now and my phone did not arrive yet?! This is inconvenient. I want to cancel the order and I want my money back! My answer: We are very sorry for your inconvenience. I just confirmed our mistake and couriered the product with small present. You can be receved the parcel tomorrow morning. If you still want to get refund, please ask to return the parcel to postman by charge collect. We will refund your money within 2 working days after get the product. Anyway, we apologize for your inconvenience again.

강사 첨삭

Hello dear student! It\'s always great to hear from you again. Thank you for urgently accomplishing your homework. I an very happy to see your effort in our daily class conversations as well as your positive learning response. Take a good rest tonight so that you\'ll have a high energy level in our class tomorrow. Don\'t forget to use English in your casual conversations. Here are some set of corrections that you have to check out and familiarize with. Take care and enjoy the rest of the evening! ~Teacher Amber HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:In this situation act as a manager and answer the complain of your customer.Situation: Mr. [Name]! I ordered a phone from your company a week ago. One of your agents told me that the shipment of the product will take only 2 business days. How come it\'s been a week now and my phone did not arrive yet?! This is inconvenient. I want to cancel the order and I want my money back! My answer: >>Correct. >>OR. Here are my answers.We are very sorry for your inconvenience. >>We are very sorry for the inconvenience. OR >>We are very sorry for the inconvenience that this has caused you.I just confirmed our mistake and couriered the product with small present. >>I have just confirmed our mistake and couriered the product with a small present.You can be receved the parcel tomorrow morning. >>You will be able to receive the parcel tomorrow morning.If you still want to get refund, please ask to return the parcel to postman by charge collect. >>If you still want to make a refund, please return the parcel to the postman and request for a charge collect.We will refund your money within 2 working days after get the product. >>We will refund your money within 2 working days after we get the product.Anyway, we apologize for your inconvenience again. >>Anyway, we apologize for the inconvenience once again.

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