home work
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
One word is wrong in each sentence. Rewrite and correct the following wrong grammar
1. My part-time job is a restaurant SURVER.
2. I GOT BACK home at 7:00 p.m. tonight.
3. I WAS born in London
4. He doesn't wake up early in the morning. - ?
5. Have you been Korea BEFORE?
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Please see example of our customer complains at bottom.
Corner seals that Daewon sealed are very weak. From Flair’s testing, we can see it is caused by lack of sufficient heat of sealing bars. Please investigate asap since the customer is rejecting the whole order and
Daewon has to produce replacement order asap.
Please see attached PDF file for “our manual seal strength test details.”
강사 첨삭
Hi! Good work! ^ ^ The sample customer complaint is very interesting. If ever you face this problem however, I hope that you could come up with a solution immediately. Good luck! I\'ll talk to you in class again tomorrow! ^ ^
T. Amber
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:One word is wrong in each sentence. Rewrite and correct the following wrong grammar1. My part-time job is a restaurant SURVER.
>>>My part-time job is at a restaurant.2. I GOT BACK home at 7:00 p.m. tonight.
>>>I will be home at 7:00 p.m. tonight.3. I WAS born in London
>>>CORRECT4. He doesn\'t wake up early in the morning. - ?>>>He doesn\'t like to wake up early in the morning.
5. Have you been Korea BEFORE?
>>>Have you been to Korea========================================================================1. Please see example of our customer complains at bottom.
>>>Please see an example of our customer complaint at the bottom.
>>>OR Please see an example of our customer complaint.
>>>OR The following is an example of our customer complaint.2. Corner seals that Daewon sealed are very weak.
>>>Daewon corner seals are very weak.
3. From Flair’s testing, we can see it is caused by lack of sufficient heat of sealing bars.
>>>CORRECT
>>>OR From Flair testing, we can see that these are caused by lack of sufficient heat from sealing bars.
>>>OR From the Flair testing, we found out that these are caused by the lack of sufficient heat from the sealing bars.
4. Please investigate asap since the customer is rejecting the whole order and Daewon has to produce replacement order asap.
>>>Please investigate asap since the customer is rejecting the whole order and Daewon has to produce replacement orders asap.
>>>OR Please investigate asap since the customer is rejecting the entire order and Daewon has to produce replacement orders asap.
>>>OR Please investigate as soon as possible since the customer is rejecting all the orders and Daewon has to produce replacement orders as soon as possible.
>>>OR Please investigate as soon as possible since the customer is rejecting all orders and Daewon has to produce replacement orders as soon as possible.
5. Please see attached PDF file for “our manual seal strength test details.”
>>>CORRECT
>>>OR Please see the attached PDF file for our manual seal strength test details.
>>>OR Please refer to the attached PDF file for our manual seal strength test details.
>>>OR Please refer to the attached PDF file for information on our seal strength test details.
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