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The disease that i\'m scared of is nothing!!
I\'m not afreid of any disease!! becouse I\'m stromg girl!!
but.. when I catch the cold I becam so weak so I can\'t breath well.
So I think I\'m afraed of cold.
Like,. I mentioned I can\'t breath well during the cold, and verry strong headache comes.
And even [이름]e times I can\'t wolk well.
강사 첨삭
Hello Onew!
Wow, this is your first writing! haha I was very surprised to see you wrote [이름]ething! What a good student! Anyway, you\'re not scared of serious diseases except for a cold? What a brave girl! Haha. It\'s true though. Having a cold feels like dying haha. Great job today. See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Kate
>>I\'m not scared of any disease!
I\'m not afreid of any disease!! becouse I\'m stromg girl!!
I\'m not afreid of any disease!! becouse I\'m stromg girl!!
>>It\'s because I\'m a strong girl!
but.. when I catch the cold I becam so weak so I can\'t breath well.
but.. when I catch the cold I becam so weak so I can\'t breath well.
>>But, when I catch a cold I become so weak so I can\'t breathe well.
So I think I\'m afraed of cold.
So I think I\'m afraed of cold.
>>So, I think I\'m afraid of catching a cold.
Like,. I mentioned I can\'t breath well during the cold, and verry strong headache comes.
Like,. I mentioned I can\'t breath well during the cold, and verry strong headache comes.
>>Like I mentioned, I can\'t breathe well during a cold, and I get severe headaches.
And even [이름]e times I can\'t wolk well.
And even [이름]e times I can\'t wolk well.
>>[이름]etimes, I can\'t even walk well.
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