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Em.... I never learn how to drow so I want [이름]eone to teach me and I want to draw better!!
And I might like to learn how to sing, couse I love singing but.. like you know I\'m not much a singer.
So I would like to learn singing and want to be good atit!!
And for the last. I want to write well. but I don\'t really think that to learn writting.
see you!!
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Hi Onew-yah! ^^
You\'re writing style is so cute haha! Anyway, I need [이름]eone to teach me how to sing as well haha. Great effort in writing and please watch out for misspelling. See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Kate
>>I never learned how to draw so I want [이름]eone to teach me and I want to draw better!
And I might like to learn how to sing, couse I love singing but.. like you know I\'m not much a singer.
And I might like to learn how to sing, couse I love singing but.. like you know I\'m not much a singer.
>>And I might like to learn how to sing, \'cause I love singing but, as you know I\'m not much of a singer.
So I would like to learn singing and want to be good at it!
So I would like to learn singing and want to be good at it!
>>CORRECT!
And for the last. I want to write well. but I don\'t really think that to learn writting.
And for the last. I want to write well. but I don\'t really think that to learn writting.
>>Lastly, I want to write well but I am not really thinking about learning how to write.
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