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I don\'t leally think that there is [이름]ething to be happy about this wold now adys.
But I bet the charictors in my own words could be happy about ouwer wold?haha!!
Because, like you know there wolds are allways terrible.
So emm, when I compare thare wolds to ouwar wold, I think I happy to borne in this wold!!
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Hello dear Onew!
It would be so cool if your characters came to life in the real world. I wonder what they would look like as real humans and not in their animation forms. LOL. Anyway, great writing! See you tomorrow!
~~Teacher Kate
>>I don\'t really think that there is [이름]ething to be happy about in this wold nowadays.
But I bet the charictors in my own words could be happy about ouwer wold?haha!!
But I bet the charictors in my own words could be happy about ouwer wold?haha!!
>>But I bet my own characters could be happy in our world, haha!!
Because, like you know there wolds are allways terrible.
>>Because, as you know, their worlds are always terrible.
So emm, when I compare thare wolds to ouwar wold, I think I happy to borne in this wold!!
So emm, when I compare thare wolds to ouwar wold, I think I happy to borne in this wold!!
>>So, when I compare their world to ours, I think they\'d be happy to be born here in this world.
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