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hmmm.. I think that\'s important becuase we need English, when we go out to foreign countrys.
And in Korea we need English to go to the good school..
And my school English teacher told me that we need English to help the foreigners that are confused with [이름]ething.
And I bet I need English for my book!
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hmmm.. I think that\'s important becuase we need English, when we go out to foreign countrys.
>>> hmmm.. I think that it\'s important because we need English when we go out to foreign countries.
And in Korea we need English to go to the good school..
And in Korea we need English to go to the good school..
>>> Moreover, in Korea, we need English to go to a good school.
And my school English teacher told me that we need English to help the foreigners that are confused with [이름]ething.
And my school English teacher told me that we need English to help the foreigners that are confused with [이름]ething.
>>> My school English teacher told me that we need English to help the foreigners that are confused with [이름]ething.
And I bet I need English for my book
And I bet I need English for my book
>>> correct
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