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2024-05-31 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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First, How do you describe your experience in Starbucks? _ At Starbucks, the most important things are great coffee and making sure customers feel comfortable. They always aim to provide excellent service. Second, what is your go to cafe or only go to cafe? what is your favorite drinks? _ I often go to cafes to study and relax. They bring me a sense of healing and relaxation. So, when I\'m able to bring joy to customers by making coffee, it makes me happy.

강사 첨삭

Hi,

Thanks for sharing the questions. These are great answers. We can go throught this later, if you want. 

-Teacher Ash


First, How do you describe your experience in Starbucks?

>> First, how would you describe your experience at Starbucks?

At Starbucks, the most important things are great coffee and making sure customers feel comfortable. 

>>At Starbucks, the most important things are great coffee and making sure customers feel comfortable.

They always aim to provide excellent service.

>>They always aim to provide excellent service.

Second, what is your go to cafe or only go to cafe?

>>Second, what is your go-to café, or do you only go to one café?

 what is your favorite drinks?

What are your favorite drinks?

 I often go to cafes to study and relax.

>>I often go to cafés to study and relax.

 They bring me a sense of healing and relaxation. 

>>They bring me a sense of healing and relaxation.

So, when I\'m able to bring joy to customers by making coffee, it makes me happy.

>>So, when I am able to bring joy to customers by making coffee, it makes me happy.

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