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Hi,
Thanks for sharing the questions. These are great answers. We can go throught this later, if you want.
-Teacher Ash
First, How do you describe your experience in Starbucks?
>> First, how would you describe your experience at Starbucks?
At Starbucks, the most important things are great coffee and making sure customers feel comfortable.
>>At Starbucks, the most important things are great coffee and making sure customers feel comfortable.
They always aim to provide excellent service.
>>They always aim to provide excellent service.
Second, what is your go to cafe or only go to cafe?
>>Second, what is your go-to café, or do you only go to one café?
what is your favorite drinks?
What are your favorite drinks?
I often go to cafes to study and relax.
>>I often go to cafés to study and relax.
They bring me a sense of healing and relaxation.
>>They bring me a sense of healing and relaxation.
So, when I\'m able to bring joy to customers by making coffee, it makes me happy.
>>So, when I am able to bring joy to customers by making coffee, it makes me happy.
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