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Why is communication so important?
> Because it serves as a bridge that connects human relationships, and whiteout communication humans life cannot survive.
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Hello, Lim!
You are right, communication is essential to human and it is like a bridge that connects us to people.
Thanks for writing your homework.
Have a great day! See you on our next class. ^^
-T.Jhozel
Why is communication so important?
> Because it serves as a bridge that connects human relationships, and whiteout communication humans life cannot survive.
>> Correct!
OR: Since communication is essential to human relationships and without it, human life cannot exist, it serves as a bridge.
OR: Since communication is essential to human relationships and without it, human life cannot exist, it serves as a bridge.
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