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2024-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Selene

학생이 쓴 원문

1.Do you know he is my brother. 2.Emilia is a great dancer.She has won many competitons. 3.Ross and Monica are siblings.she came to visit the museum. 4.Look at this picture.Isn\'t it beutiful? 5.I brought a ball today.It is mine.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
You did so well in this homework, keep it up! Kindly check the spelling of the words first and observe proper spacing, other than that, all your answers are cgood!
~Teacher Selene 


1.Do you know he is my brother.
>>Do you know he is my brother?
2.Emilia is a great dancer.She has won many competitons.
>>Emilia is a great dancer. She has won many competition. 
3.Ross and Monica are siblings.she came to visit the museum.
>>Ross and Monica are siblings. They came to visit the museum.
4.Look at this picture.Isn\'t it beutiful?
>>Look at this picture. Isn\'t it beautiful?
5.I brought a ball today.It is mine.
>>I brought a ball today. It is mine. 

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