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2014-12-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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My university major are vehicle and mechanical engineering. I studied vehicle engineering for four years and mechanical engineering for three years. Our company manufactures vehicle parts. My job is testing engineer. Major work are vibration and durability test. I want to learn English well ,because I wish communicate to foreigner.

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Hi there, Mr. [Name]! Thank you for your composition! I\'m glad to have you in class. I hope you will always feel comfortable with me. Feel free to express your thoughts and to raise queries. Let\'s work hard together for your improvement. Take care! T. JanE ^^ My university major are vehicle and mechanical engineering.>> My majors in the university were Vehicle and Mechanical Engineering.  I studied vehicle engineering for four years and mechanical engineering for three years.>> Correct  Our company manufactures vehicle parts.>> Correct My job is testing engineer.>> My position in the company is Testing Engineer.  Major work are vibration and durability test.>> My major work includes vibration and durability testing. I want to learn English well ,because I wish communicate to foreigner. >> I want to learn English well becvause I wish to communicate with foreigners.   

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