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I think it tells people what they think of that person. Because when we see a bad dress, we think it\'s bad.
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Hi Justin!
Thank you for the effort of writing about something new.
It\'s good for us to stretch our way of thinking once in a while.
You did good overall.
You were able to grasp the question well and you did your best to answer.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I think it tells people what they think of that person.
>> I think it determines what people think of that person.
Because when we see a bad dress, we think it\'s bad.
>> It\'s because when we see a bad dress, we think it\'s bad.
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