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Couples who are living together for a longtime don\'t have love affection.
There is a word \"hateful affection\"
Marriage couples can be patient from their past memory .
So it is important that couples need to try having a good behavior.
Intimate is a good memory.but it is more important to be together in the same room.
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Ms. [Name]!
This makes me a little sad. hahaha But I think it\'s true because a lot of older couples often argue about petty things.I guess, I will try to keep this in mind to avoid such a situation. Thank you for this!
T. Aki~
Couples who are living together for a longtime don\'t have love affection.
>>> Couples who are living together for a long time don\'t have love or affection.
There is a word \"hateful affection\"
>>> CORRECT!
OR >> It is called \"hateful affection\".
Marriage couples can be patient from their past memory .
>>> Marriage couples can be patient from their memory.
So it is important that couples need to try having a good behavior.
>>> So it is important that couples need to try having good behavior.
Intimate is a good memory.but it is more important to be together in the same room.
>>> Intimate is a good memory but it is more important to be together in the same room.
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