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What food goes well with coffee?
Many people drink coffee to feel alert. Is there a better way to increase your concentration? How?
Is coffee overpriced? How much do people pay for coffee in your country?
I recommend eat it with bread. and eat it with sweet something.
I feel to increase concentration by coffee. I know that drink the heabal tea and green tea for concentration.
I think that coffee is very expensive. but But sell a lot of cheap coffee these days. typical yellow brand.
for example mega coffee, compose coffee and Backdabang coffee. They are only korea brand coffee shop.
They are cheaper than other coffee shop.
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[이름] [이름],
I feel to increase concentration by coffee.
I think that coffee is very expensive.
for example mega coffee, compose coffee and Backdabang coffee.
They are cheaper than other coffee shop.
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I used to like drinking coffee too but not anymore.
-Teacher Ash
I recommend eat it with bread. and eat it with sweet something.
>> I recommend eating it with bread or something sweet.
I feel to increase concentration by coffee.
>> My concentration increases when I drink coffee.
I know that drink the heabal tea and green tea for concentration.
>> I also know that drinking herbal tea and green tea increases concentration.
I think that coffee is very expensive.
>> I think coffee is very expensive.
but But sell a lot of cheap coffee these days. typical yellow brand.
>> But there are a lot of cheap coffee these days especially the yellow brand.
for example mega coffee, compose coffee and Backdabang coffee.
>>An example of this is the Mega coffee which contains Backdabang coffee.
They are only korea brand coffee shop.
>> It\'s a Korean brand only sold in Korea.
They are cheaper than other coffee shop.
>> They are cheaper than other coffees out there.
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