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학생이 쓴 원문
its is possessive, like him or her. But it's means it is.
last means end.latest means very closer at now.
lose means we forget it so it's disappear.
loose means free.
< Sleeping Beauty>
When the sleeping beauty was baby, thirteen fairies come.
Twenteen fairies said good things.
But one fairy said bad thing. That fairy was evil.
The evil fairy said "If beauty come to eighteen years old she will prick her fingers ona spindle and she will sleep 100 years."
When she eighteen years old she prick her fingers on a spindle and she sleep.
But the handsome prince come to beauty.
The prince kissed to beauty, beauty wake up.
So prince and princess(beauty) married.
And they live happily.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Great composition you have here! You did well on the homework. ;) Just remember proper capitalization and the use of punctuation marks. I love the story of Sleeping Beauty! It\'s one of my favorite fairytales. :D Have a great night! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
its is possessive, like him or her.
>> CORRECT
Or >> \'Its\' is possessive, like him or her.
But it\'s means it is.>> But \'it\'s\' means \'it is\'.last means end.>> Last means the \'end\'.
latest means very closer at now.>> Latest means it\'s closer and more recent.lose means we forget it so it\'s disappear.
>> Lose means we forgot about it so it disappeared.loose means free.>> CORRECT
OR >> Loose means \'free\'.< Sleeping Beauty>
>> CORRECTWhen the sleeping beauty was baby, thirteen fairies come.
>> When sleeping beauty was a baby, thirteen fairies came.Twenteen fairies said good things.
>> Twelve fairies said good things about her.But one fairy said bad thing.
>> But one fairy said a bad thing.
That fairy was evil.
>> CORRECTThe evil fairy said \"If beauty come to eighteen years old she will prick her fingers ona spindle and she will sleep 100 years.\"
>> The evil fairy said, \"When beauty turns eighteen, she will prick her finger on a spindle and she will fall asleep for 100 years.\"
When she eighteen years old she prick her fingers on a spindle and she sleep.
>> When she turned eighteen, she pricked her fingers on a spindle and she fell asleep.But the handsome prince come to beauty.
>> A handsome prince came to see beauty.The prince kissed to beauty, beauty wake up.
>> The prince kissed her and she woke up.So prince and princess(beauty) married.
>> They got married.And they live happily.
>> And they lived happily ever after.
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