Home work
학생이 쓴 원문
accept : It's like receive.
except : Not include.
advice : Advice is a noun.
advise : Advise is a verb.
<Seven blind mice.>
There was seven blind mice and elephant.
But seven mice didn't know that is elephant.
The seven mice fight because of elephant.
The seven mice has different think about that elephant.
They thing that is pillar, snake, spear, cliff, fan and rope.
Because they go just one part.
But last mice know that is elephant.
Because he goes every part.
So this book give us a moral.
moral is knowing in part may make a fine tale, but wisdom comes from seeing the whole.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Thanks for doing your homework! I appreciate the effort. Your book reports are always fun and interesting to read. I personally like the moral behind this story. Keep it up! Check my corrections here okay? Good night! CIAO!
~Teacher Marie~
accept : It\'s like receive.
>> CORRECT
OR >> It means \'to receive\'.except : Not include.>> It means \'not included\'.advice : Advice is a noun.
>> CORRECTadvise : Advise is a verb.>> CORRECT<Seven blind mice.>>> CORRECTThere was seven blind mice and elephant.
>> There were seven blind mice and an elephant.But seven mice didn\'t know that is elephant.
>> The seven blind mice didn\'t know that it is an elephant.The seven mice fight because of elephant.
>> CORRECT
OR >> The seven mice fought because of the elephant.The seven mice has different think about that elephant.
>> The seven mice have different thoughts about the elephant.
OR >> The seven mice have different guesses as to what the elephant is.They thing that is pillar, snake, spear, cliff, fan and rope.
>> They thought it might be a pillar, a snake, a spear, a cliff, a fan and a rope.Because they go just one part.
>> Because they just went through one part of the elephant.But last mice know that is elephant.
>> The last mice knew that it is an elephant though.Because he goes every part.
>> Because he went through every body part.So this book give us a moral.
>> This book gives us a moral.moral is knowing in part may make a fine tale, but wisdom comes from seeing the whole.
>> The moral here is, knowing a part might make a fine tale but the wisdom comes from seeing it as a whole.
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