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Q. What do you want to include in your ideal fitness program?
A. I\'d like to include a running in my ideal fitness program because running helps me manage my weight directly.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju[이름]!
Happy Friday! I hope you\'re well and having a great time. ^^
Thank you for doing your homework! I like how you connected running directly to a benefit. Let\'s practice expanding your answers next time. :)
See you next week!
~ Trixia
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I\'d like to include a running in my ideal fitness program because running helps me manage my weight directly.
- I\'d like to include running in my ideal fitness program because it helps me directly manage my weight.
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