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Q. Where do you want to travel the most? Why?
A. I want to travel Switzerland. When I visit Switzerland about 3 years ago, it was very beautiful country that I had ever seen. The nature of that is very magnificent and huge for all of things. So I want to go there again.
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Hi, Ju[이름]!
You shared your travel experience with Switzerland very nicely. I like how you described the country’s beauty and nature. It shows your excitement and appreciation for what you saw. It’s [이름]derful that you want to go back again. ^^
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I want to travel Switzerland.
- CORRECT.
When I visit Switzerland about 3 years ago, it was very beautiful country that I had ever seen.
- CORRECT.
BETTER SAY: When I visited Switzerland about three years ago, it was the most beautiful country I had ever seen.
The nature of that is very magnificent and huge for all of things.
Its nature is magnificent and vast in every way.
So I want to go there again.
- CORRECT.
BETTER SAY: That’s why I want to go there again.
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