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2026-04-03 · 첨삭 강사 Trixia

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Q. What was the most interesting place you have ever visited? A. Shanghai is one of the most interesting place I\'ve ever visited. There are many buildings that combined European and Chinese styles, so it gave me new experience to enjoy viewing.

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Hi, Ju[이름]!

You described Shanghai in a very engaging way. I like how you noticed the mix of European and Chinese styles in the buildings. Well done! ^^
~ Trixia

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Shanghai is one of the most interesting place I\'ve ever visited. There are many buildings that combined European and Chinese styles, so it gave me new experience to enjoy viewing.
> Shanghai is one of the most interesting places I\'ve ever visited. There are many buildings that combine European and Chinese styles, so it gave me a new experience to enjoy.

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